| Build an essay #2 Deadline:
Wednesday, October 11 [Hardcopy in class; digital copy in dropbox]
Write a one, Times New
Roman 12 pt., single-spaced argument which imitates the same model as used in
the first Build an Essay assignment,
but this time use a quote either from Schlosser's Fast Food Nation or from
one of the sources you used in your practice summaries the past week or so as the foundation
for the essay. In either case, reviewing Schlosser's book is the place to start
thinking this problem out. Pick a quote which speaks to you about the
topic which you will be pursuing
for the remainder of the semester as we begin to build toward the final Informed
Argument.
This writing:
- Should have an interesting two part
title which is no more than one line long:
- Part one should state the general topic
followed by a colon [Example -- Obesity and Fast Food:]
- Part two should indicate the main idea
that you will be getting across in the essay [Example -- Obesity and Fast Food:
An Epidemic that Can Be Stopped]
- As an introduction to the essay, you should use a quote followed by a 2-3 sentence summary/paraphrase of
the main argument from the source [either Schlosser or one of your
summaries] which contains the sub-topic you are
interested in.
- That quote/paraphrase/summary should
be followed by an elaboration which uses one of the ideas you found wither while
collecting research this past couple of weeks or from Schlosser. In other words,
both the
work you did on practice summary/paraphrasing and from our reading of
Schlosser should be integrated into the
the Build an Essay.
- You don't, however, have to use the exact
words of one of your summary/paraphrases; it could be that you remember a
statistic or go back to the original and find an exact quote. It would
also be a plus if in the elaboration you use a quote which disagrees with
Schlosser. But whatever you use, you have to go track it down in the
source so that you can make in "in-text citation" [Sometimes called a
"parenthetical citation." Example: (65).]
- Your elaboration could either work to defend
Schlosser against the opponent's argument or work against Schlosser using
the opponent's argument.
- Should, from that point on, follow the
model for Build and Essay closely with one
exception:
- Remember how the third example at the
end should be an example from the world at large -- use an example drawn
from one of your sources, either from Schlosser or one of the essays you've
summarized.
- Remember to use in-text/parenthetical
citations when quoting and paraphrasing.
- Should have a citation for both
Schlosser's book and the second source you use on a second page titled "Works
Cited" [See Everyday Writer for form].
- Be perfectly free of grammar/mechanical
errors [2 points deducted for each serious error; 1 point deducted for minor
errors].
- Be coherent and read easily.
- Be intelligent and thoughtful.
100 points.
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